Yuck.

I don’t like this piece at all. I’m not showing, but telling. I don’t have a good synthesized story. There are too many facets of her life that I am trying to touch on. This has proven to be a very difficult piece for me to write. I talked to other people in the cavern, but they didn’t give me “anything good.” Access proved to be more of a problem than I anticipated. I wasn’t able to schedule another meeting until Thursday, where I’ll get more informal time. Between that meeting and the workshop, I hope to have more ideas, drive, and focus for this piece.